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- Simple, effective titles
- Powerful opening shot
- Use of slomo + sound -enigma code
- Appropriate soundtrack
- Effective match on action
- Good use of close ups
- Narrative structure
- Uneven, disorted sound levels
- Cause of framing - keep the face in frame
- Lip sync was uneven
- Use of over-the-shoulder shot
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- Good soundtrack
- Good narrative
- use of flashback
- Non-diagetic sound
- Great use of audio
- Quality of the sound
- Camera too shaky during 180 degree shot
- narrative was difficult to understand
During this editing task i have learnt alot of editing techniques but the 3 skills that stood out in my editing video was
1. i successfully learnt how to the match on action with several editing since i had to cut between the shots.
2. i have learnt how to perfectly construct a flashback using different saturation levels and the editing skill called pro camp
3. i have used jump cuts from one scene to another to create tension and more realism in the conversation between two characters
4)
one weakness is that the camerawork in my editing video was shaky and blurry due to not using a tripod. Next time, to improve, i will use a tripod or get a more professional cameraman to record the scenes
A strengthens is that i have use a lot of editing skills and included all three editing aspects that was assigned to us. Most of the editing skills were edited perfectly for example, match on action.
5) Learner response: what aspect of editing did you find most difficult? What have you learned from this process that will help you when you start the actual coursework later this year?
What i found most difficult was constructing the over the shoulder shot and reverse shot. This was because most of the time the main image was blurred or not in the frame properly. The skills that i have learnt that will help me is the jump cuts and editing to create a realistic flashback.
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